Hey Nick, I really like your video and think that you conducted yourself in a very professional manner. I can tell you rehearsed your video many times and took time to make sure you got across all of the points that you want to make clear to people. I think the background is very nice too because it enhances the relaxed feel that is an elevator pitch.
Nick, I like your elevator pitch so far, you look professional and the pitch is informational and concise. However, it is a little short so you could probably add in a few more concrete details and the plan you have to carry out this solution. You have a really good idea that so many students will be grateful for. I also like how you did this outside, it makes for a better background than a room with bad lighting!
Hey Nick, I really like your video and think that you conducted yourself in a very professional manner. I can tell you rehearsed your video many times and took time to make sure you got across all of the points that you want to make clear to people. I think the background is very nice too because it enhances the relaxed feel that is an elevator pitch.
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ReplyDeleteI like your elevator pitch so far, you look professional and the pitch is informational and concise. However, it is a little short so you could probably add in a few more concrete details and the plan you have to carry out this solution. You have a really good idea that so many students will be grateful for. I also like how you did this outside, it makes for a better background than a room with bad lighting!