Friday, March 15, 2019
17A Elevator Pitch Number 2
After taking the feedback and reviewing my last elevator pitch I saw that mine needed to be a little bit longer and also I needed to be more into it. Some of the points I make I need to emphasize them a little bit more and tell people exactly what the problem is here. The first one was definitely professional and I must continue to speak loudly and clearly like I did in the first one. After reviewing the feedback I got from my peers I have tried to extend and improve my elevator pitch.
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Hey Nick, great job on this elevator pitch. Since I watched the first one, I can tell that you most certainly improved from your first one. You made sure to make it longer and you also did a good job of capturing the audience and making them more into your product. Great job, Nick.
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