From the last elevator pitch everyone told me that they liked my idea and that I should follow through with it. Over the course of the time between these two elevator pitches of have taken people's feedback and used it in creating another one. In this pitch I tried getting straight to the point and also I tried to speak louder.
Nick,
ReplyDeleteYou are off to a good start, however, I think it could benefit from being slightly longer. It also might be better if you remain stationary throughout the pitch instead of walking around as it might detract from your overall message.
Hey Nick, great job on your elevator pitch. You did a solid job of capturing the audience and making sure they are locked in and paying attention to your points. My only two suggestions would be to work on your hand motions and to make it a little bit longer. Overall though I have seen a lot of improvement and think that this is your best one yet.
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